Wednesday, 26 May 2010

MY MAGICAL PLACE(REVISED DESCRIPTION)

When summer comes,I always go to my hometown,named Bahce in Osmaniye with my family.Since my childhood,I have always loved this town and I have always looked forward to going there . For me,it is the purest place I have ever seen.I experienced many childhood memory. I had many friends that I have kept up with even now.Also, There are not many buildings and fabrics,ıt remains ıts nature and ıt protects ıtself from human beings as ıt was when I was a child.

Bahce is a hidden heaven with clear air and heavy forest.It is very green as if ıt is painted with a green colour.Besides that,there are many river from little to big and every river has a little and wooden bridge which is made by human hands.Once a time,I took my photo in one of the bridges which is near my house.When I go to there I see that everything in that photo is the same now.. colours, the bridge and the river...

There are some fish farm where fısh are fed and sold,especıally trout,in Bahce.It is very popular habit on the grounds that some people often come there for a fish farm as a tourist or visitor to see the fısh in their habitat and eat the fısh whose taste are delicious and marvellous with specıal salad which is prepared with specıal sauce.Bahce is also famous for ıts pure water and there is no lime in them some waters are sold for all over Turkey for instance,Bahcepınar water is the number one in the Mediterrian region and this water’s fabric is in Bekdemir of Bahce.

Bahce’s nature is never destroyed.even there is a mill which has been kept alive for years.I remember my grandfather while he was going to this mill. Sometimes he took me thereand I remembered also that I watched everything very carefully..There are some farmer and local people who go there for their business .It has old houses whıch were built along time ago from the wooden or stone.These old houses used to protect people from hot.There are few people who live in these old houses.Some people who live there have some cows and sheep, some people cultıvate wheat and corn.They go on their life with them.

Briefly,Bahce is such a magıcal place that ıt fascınates you immediately with both nature and people.In Bahçe, everything is as if nobody lived there. Nature and environment has been the same since my childhood. Thats why I love this town. It is my pure place.In winter months,I miss Bahçe very much,I advise you to go and see there.After that,you will understand ıt is unbelievable..

CAUSES OF INSOMNIA( FİFTH PARAGRAPH CAUSE AND EFFECT ESSAY)

In today’s world , there is nearly nobody who has any ilness and problem. However; the most common ilness in our era is sleeplessness named insomnia. This ilness can be seen in every person from young to old and nowadays the number of people that have difficulty in sleeping is increasing day by day. Why people can not sleep? There are many causes but there are three main reasons that contribute to insomnia. Stres, some ilnesses and some drugs.

Firstly, the most important cause of insomnia is stres that affects us negatively. It is inevitable that we can escape from the stressor .Even daily hassles can be stressor in our life for instance waiting in the line may be a stressor for us and all of stressors might lead to insomnia.when you have a problem, you always think that problem and you can not sleep comfortly.For example, unemployed people may not sleep well on the grounds that they have many economical problems.They always think about these problems so this leads to stress.Also students can have insomnia. before the exam week they may not sleep well because of stres.

Secondly, some serious illnesses such as mıgrain, ulcer, cancer can cause insomnia. Headaches in our brain prevent us from sleeping. It can increase the pain and we can not sleep. When we have some serious ilnesses, Physcologically we are under a great deal of pressure thats why ıt can cause insomnia. For example, people who have cancer may not sleep easily because of their illnesses.They suffer from cancer and they always think about their health..Therefore, some serious illnesses lead to insomnia.

Lastly, people may not sleep because of drugs. Many people use drugs when they get sick, and most of these drugs have some serious side effects.One of them is insomnia, so some drugs can also affect insomnia.

In conclusion, many people ignore insomnia and they forget the importance of this illness, but it can cause many difficulties for people. If we can not sleep, we may be agressive or pessimistic. İn addition, we can not focuse on our work thats why we get tired more. Finally, needless to say that insomnia is serious case which shouldn't be taken lightly in terms of our health and our physciology. For a good sleep, we can take some precautions.May be, we can be more careful about drugs and medicines and we can be stronger against to hardships. If we can do so, we can be succesful..

Sunday, 23 May 2010

MY MAGICAL PLACE(REVISED OF DESCRIPTION)

When summer comes,I always go to my hometown,named Bahce in Osmaniye with my family.Since my childhood,I have always loved this town and I have always looked forward to going there . For me,it is the purest place I have ever seen.I experienced many childhood memory. I had many friends that I have kept up with even now.Also, There are not many buildings and fabrics,ıt remains ıts nature and ıt protects ıtself from human beings as ıt was when I was a child.

Bahce is a hidden heaven with clear air and heavy forest.It is very green as if ıt is painted with a green colour.Besides that,there are many river from little to big and every river has a little and wooden bridge which is made by human hands.Once a time,I took my photo in one of the bridges which is near my house.When I go to there I see that everything in that photo is the same now.. colours, the bridge and the river...

There are some fish farm where fısh are fed and sold,especıally trout,in Bahce.It is very popular habit on the grounds that some people often come there for a fish farm as a tourist or visitor to see the fısh in their habitat and eat the fısh whose taste are delicious and marvellous with specıal salad which is prepared with specıal sauce.Bahce is also famous for ıts pure water and there is no lime in them some waters are sold for all over Turkey for instance,Bahcepınar water is the number one in the Mediterrian region and this water’s fabric is in Bekdemir of Bahce.

Bahce’s nature is never destroyed.even there is a mill which has been kept alive for years.I remember my grandfather while he was going to this mill. Sometimes he took me thereand I remembered also that I watched everything very carefully..There are some farmer and local people who go there for their business .It has old houses whıch were built along time ago from the wooden or stone.These old houses used to protect people from hot.There are few people who live in these old houses.Some people who live there have some cows and sheep, some people cultıvate wheat and corn.They go on their life with them.

Briefly,Bahce is such a magıcal place that ıt fascınates you immediately with both nature and people.In Bahçe, everything is as if nobody lived there. Nature and environment has been the same since my childhood. Thats why I love this town. It is my pure place.In winter months,I miss Bahçe very much,I advise you to go and see there.After that,you will understand ıt is unbelievable..

A ROMANTIC NIGHT(process essay)

Suppose that you were newly married and you thought that you found the love of the life and the day was your the first anniversary of marriage. What an important day. That's why you should prepare for this day in details because ıt shows that how much you love him and how much he is precious. The best thing what to do is to make a unforgettable day. And you should begin with firstly a quite nice dinner. Why? because every man loves eating and dinners prepared by tactfully.
Firstly, you should select the list of the meals but Dont forget that meals must be special. You can cook something that you have never tried before or you can make something that you always cook but in a different way. May be with a special sauce or with a nice decoration. You should do everything by yourself. It is the most important thing that men care about.
After you choose the list of the meal and cook, you should make your table. The table must be romantic and to some extend exciting. When your husband, enters from the door, he should notice it immediately because of ıts being fascinating. When you make the table, you had better be careful about something for example: the table reflects your taste and esthetic. You can act according to that. You can use some candles which add the table more romantic atmosphere. In addition, every table has an flower. you put the flowers that you like the most. In my opinion, roses can be the most suitable for that night.
Later, you should wear smart clothes. May be you can have your hair more attractive. In addition, you can make up but do not exagerrate. You should protect your natural beauty. After all of them, you must prepare a love music which is specific for you and him. During the dinner, you can listen to it. May be you can dance with him with this song or remembering something that have a very important place in both you and your husband. Lastly, there is a very important thing that in this important day, you shouldn forget to buy a gift to your husband. It can be a clock, ıt can be a parfume. You decide it...
To sum up, the day must be really unforgettable. You can do everything for that and your husband because special people must be treated by special ways. Do not forget that all these everything are not in vain...

Thursday, 20 May 2010

MERSIN AND DENIZLI(COMPARE AND CONTRAST ESSAY)

There are two places that are very important in my life.One is Mersin where I was born and I grow up the other is Denizli where I came for my education and I will spend the rest of my time. Both places are sometimes different from each other and sometimes they are in common in some ways. However; both of them play an important role in my life
I want to begin with differences between Denizli and Mersin . Mersin has an edge to sea however; Denizli doesnt.This is the most important point that makes me miss Mersin when I am in Denizli. Because I like sea very much. Even I feel bored or lonely, I immediately go to seaside and I come to myself. It is very relaxing. The second is that Mersin is bigger than Denizli in terms of population or places that you can spend the leisure time. In Mersin there are many touristic places that draw people's attention. For example: Kız Kalesi, Cennet Cehennnem, Eshab-ı Keyf. However; when we look at Denizli, we see that Denizli's touristic places are limited.
Another differnce between Denizli and Mersin is climate. In summer Denizli has dry hot and ıt burns you.However; Mersin has humidity and ıt affects the degree of the hot. When I am in Denizli, The summer bothers me and I can not put up with. May be I am accustomed to mersin..
The other difference is the variety of people. Mersin has many people from everwhere. From Diyarbakır, From Kars but denizli hasnt variety of people like Mersin. There are many people who immigrate Mersin and ıt leads to this variety. Thats why the crime rate is higher than Denizli. Denizli is a safe city. You are comfortable when you walk in the street but İn Mersin This situation changes.
There are many similiraties like differences. When I came to Denizli, I noticed firstly, that the city's people is quite nice and helpful. One day, I asked a man who was in the street that how to go the bus garage. He didnt answer me. Instead of replying, he came with me and showed me the garage. Since that time, I love people of Denizli.Like that, Mersin's people is also very helpful and frankly.
To sum up, there are many things which are good or bad, differnces or similarities.However;Everything that I mention about can add a colour these cities.Finally, If you ask me which city is more likable, I choose Mersin. It is my love forever...

Thursday, 6 May 2010

Cosby Park (SAMPLE ESSAY)

Cosby Park


The Great Smoky Mountains is one of the most famous parks in the United States. The park is known for its beautiful mountains and streams, clean air, and frequent rain. My local part of the park is Cosby, located in the Great Smoky Mountains eighty-two miles west of the East Tennessee State University campus (www.nps.gov.grsm.prcoscg.htm). The park is a wonderful, activity-filled stop for any student wanting to get away for a few days.

The drive to Cosby passes by quickly because of all the interesting sites along the way. For example, Newport is home of the Thai Kitchen which has the best food I have ever tasted for only about $8.00 per person. The restaurant offers a variety of dishes such as chicken fried rice, spicy chicken basil fried rice, beef and broccoli and the excellent appetizers of egg rolls and crispy wontons. After stopping for dinner at the Thai Kitchen, you can travel 11 miles west to the Kyle Carver Orchard. The Kyle Carver Orchard was established in 1942 and spreads for over 75 acres. The orchard is known for its fresh cider and delicious apple pies that are fresh baked throughout the day (Heritage Tour 1). After eating your dessert at the Kyle Carver Orchard, you can travel the remaining seven miles to the park.

Cosby is nestled in a prime spot located thirty minutes from Douglas Lake, Gatlinburg, Pigeon Forge, and Dollywood. The park has a large picnic area that is known for its frequent visits by the bears that love to snack on the tourists' picnic lunches. The park also offers year-around camping with a special camping area designated for those people with horses. The park has 175 camping sites, so the camping areas are very plentiful for any student wanting to camp for a few days (www.nps.gov/grsm/prcoscg.htm).

Personally, my favorite things about the park are its hiking trails, the Low Gap and Appalachian Trails. The Low Gap hiking trail passes through the freezing Cosby Creek and continues along a beautiful scenic path. The paths are for hikers of any age because of their moderate trail grade. The paths host a variety of unusual flora and fauna including deer, snakes, and bears. In fact, I have never been on the trail without seeing a snake slithering along its path swimming in the creek.

My favorite attraction along the Low Gap Trail is the natural spring that is piped down from the mountains. Many tourists carry cups along this trail, so they can drink the fresh water bubbling directly from the earth (Heritage Tour 1). While walking the trails, a hiker needs to take along hiking boots, long pants, a raincoat, and a cup. These items are necessary for any hiker's protection and comfort in the wilderness.

After finishing the hike, campers can return to their campsite where they can roast marshmallows and enjoy the animal sounds of the surrounding forest. I would only plan to camp for a few days because of the poor conditions of the outdated restrooms. These restrooms do not have showers, electricity, flushable toilets, or any other modern day conveniences, but the beautiful foliage, hiking, and rafting still make Cosby a worthwhile site to spend a weekend.

After having a good night's sleep, a camper can wake up and put on their bathing suit and get ready for an adventure. The campers' adventure begins by walking down to the Cosby Creek to an area known as the Night Hole for its ice cold water that the sun supposedly never shines upon. Here, the water is about 12 feet deep and the pools make a great place for rock jumping. Each warm day in Cosby, you can find several groups of tourist waiting their turn to jump off the rock of their choice into the freezing water. The water is a thrilling shock after the long, hot hike to the pools. While rock jumping, a tourist needs to bring along an old pair of shoes because the rocks are sharp along the bottom of the creek bed, but this small discomfort is definitely worth the thrill. Next, a tourist should continue their adventure by making a stop at the Pigeon River Rafting Company located sixteen miles east of the park. The Pigeon River Rafting Company is a new company recently established in 1998. Here, a tourist can enjoy a three-mile rafting trip with several exciting class three and four rapids. For the more inexperienced rafter, the company provides a lazy river ride for children and the elderly where very little paddling is involved. Prices range from $15 to $40 depending on the group number and type of trip taken .

Cosby is an ideal travel location for any student wanting to escape the pressures of college for a weekend. The trip is not very expensive and has various activities such as swimming, camping, and hiking that any student would enjoy.

Is It Right? (Argumentative Essay)

Capital punishment is the execution of a person by judicial process as a punishment.Long years ago,this punishment was not debated andı t was accepted by people like dogmatic belief or rituel.However;ın two era,it has been opened into discussion.Nowadays,it is a controversial issue that people argue.Also.there are many people who are advocates of capital punishment like people who are against capital punishment.If you ask me,I am absolutely against deat penalthy.If you wonder why?
Death penalthy is punishment but not deterrent.The guilty person has been executed for years but there is no deterrent effect.For example:In U.S.A capital punishment is used but according to the a research the highest crime rate is in U.S.A.
Capital punishment or death penalthy is a punishment way that is very barbaric and horrifying.The guilty person is hanged in front of public or he is executed with nonhumanistic way. The guilty’s family has never recovered and everybody is affected that event.
Some supporter of capital punishment claim that people who commit a great crime like murder,rape deserve death penalthy.However;they forget that capital punishment is the esay solution or easy way for them.Life prison is more effective than death penalthy.If they want that they must undergo an extensive amount of pain,life prison is too painful to put up with.
To sum up,death penalty is a revenge that reinforced towards guilty people. If we reinforce this punishment,there is no difference between us and guilty people.In addition e
verybody makes a error and everybody deserves once more chance...