Thursday, 18 March 2010

MY MAGICAL PLACE(descriptive essay)

When summer comes,I always go my hometown,named Bahce in Osmaniye with my family.Since my childhood,I have always loved this town and I have always looked forward to going there .According to me,It is the purest place I have ever seen.There are not many buildings and fabrics,ıt remains ıts nature and also ıt protects ıtself from human beings. Bahce is a hidden heaven with clear air and heavy forest.It is very green as if ıt is painted with a green colour.Besides that,there are many river from little to big and every river has a little and wooden bridge which is made by human hands.Once a time,I took my photo in one of the bridges which is near my house.

There are some fish farm where fısh are fed and sold,especıally trout,in Bahce.It is very popular habit on the grounds that some people often come there for a fish farm as a tourist or visitor to see the fısh in their habitat and eat the fısh whose taste are delicious and marvellous with specıal salad which is prepared specıal sauce.Bahce is also famous for ıts pure water and there is no lime in them furthermore,some water supplıes are sold all over Turkey for instance,Bahcepınar water is the number one in the Mediterrian region and this water’s fabric is in Bekdemir of Bahce.

Bahce’s nature is never destroyed.even there is a mill which has been kept alive for years.There are some farmer and local community who go there for their business .It has old houses whıch were built along time ago from the wooden or stone.There is few people who live in these old houses.Some people who live there have some cows and sheep, some of people cultıvate wheat and corn.They go on their life with them.

Briefly,Bahce is such a magıcal place that ıt fascınates you immediately with both nature and people.In winter months,I miss there very much,I advise you to go and see there.After that,you will understand ıt is unbelievable..

4 comments:

  1. hi dear your essay is very good.Your descriptions arevery nice and beautiful.You used many descriptions and adjectives

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  2. Betul,
    A very good description of "Bahce" but the essay has some errors to be corrected. Look at the text to see these errors: spelling and stylictic errors need to be corrected. You can also add more description of the place.

    You wrote:
    "When summer comes,I always go??? my hometown,named Bahce in Osmaniye with my family.Since my childhood,I have always loved this town and I have always looked forward to going there .According ??? to me,It is the purest place I have ever seen.There are not many buildings and fabrics,ıt remains ıts nature and also ıt protects ıtself from human beings.


    Bahce is a hidden heaven with clear air and heavy forest.It is very green as if ıt is painted with a green colour.Besides that,there are many river from little to big and every river has a little and wooden bridge which is made by human hands.Once a time,I took my photo in one of the bridges which is near my house.

    There are some fish farm where fısh are fed and sold,especıally trout,in Bahce.It is very popular habit on the grounds that some people often come there for a fish farm as a tourist or visitor to see the fısh in their habitat and eat the fısh whose taste are delicious and marvellous with specıal salad which is prepared??? specıal sauce.Bahce is also famous for ıts pure water and there is no lime in them furthermore,some water supplıes are sold all over Turkey ???? (run on sentence???) for instance,Bahcepınar water is the number one in the Mediterrian region and this water’s fabric is in Bekdemir of Bahce.




    Bahce’s nature is never destroyed.even there is a mill which has been kept alive for years.There are some farmer and local community??? who go there for their business .It has old houses whıch were built along time ago from the wooden or stone.There is??? few people who live in these old houses.Some people who live there have some cows and sheep, some of ??? people cultıvate wheat and corn.They go on their life with them.




    Briefly,Bahce is such a magıcal place that ıt fascınates you immediately with both nature and people.In winter months,I miss there???? very much,I advise you to go and see there.After that,you will understand ıt is unbelievable..

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  3. I liked your description essay.It is attracting.apart from some grammatical errors it is effective.

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  4. hi betül,
    Your essay is very good.I like your essay.But there are some mistakes.But these mistakes is normal, i think.All of us make some mistakes.:)And your essay is very effective. Your descriptions are very good but you can improve your descriptions.:)SEE YOU, HONEY

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