Nowadays,the crime rate is increasing rapidly all over the world.The highest crime rate is in America,after America Turkey and Iraq are in line.The lowest crime rate is in Japan.The world,including our country is not safe anymore to live in a peace because of the crimes which are committed in every minute by people from child to young.People are stealing, killing and all everythıng even do not come the mınd.However; Have you ever thought that why people commit a crime?There are some reasons behind this act.
First,according to scientist especıally DNA engıneer,human have some gene whıch carry the crıme or other disorders.Not everybody,some have these genes from the birth and the gene which is not good leads people to commıt a crime. The idea is new but ıt has been accepted..
The second reason is atmosphere or community whıch people lıve in .Everybody doesnt have good opportunıty to live in a beautıful place and among the decent and qualıty people.Socıal statue is dıfferent from one person to other.Some people are very rıch in contrast some people are so poor that they have dıffıculty in fındıng only one bread so they have to commıt a crıme.May be,they have a famıly and they are unemployed.There is no alternatıve way to do thats why person can steal or do the ıllegal busıness.That is a reason.In japan, people are on wellfare but in developing countrıes or America whıch is consist of varıous natıon people are trying to get wellfare.This show us there is a relatıon between crıme and socıal statue or money.
There are some reasons like that for example famıly,educatıon or physıcologıc problems ın addıtıon pleasure from the crıme.All can cause commiting a crime.In my opinion every person has to have meanıngful reason for commıttıng a crıme.It is nonsense to commıt a crıme ın vain..
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